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Re: The Loveliest Spice
Hello dear reader. :) Got here some poem I wrote a year ago, praising the wonderful entity of the Great Holy One. :) It's from the love and fire burning ...
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Re: blinkk.
'Blink' When you wake up And realize, Everything about you is different. The shades in your skin, Maybe the person beyond your appearance. We all walk around blind, Unable to ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Tell me I'm in love: Review #2
“Tell me I’m in Love” This is not a love songMy dreams almost came true When I first laid my eyes upon you I hate it when we part I’d ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The truth about celebrity.
Any constructive criticism is welcomed.. Media hype and fans galore Is what makes a celebrity Talent is a plus But not a must So much for originality Journalists fight then ...
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Re: You are Woman
You are beautiful beyond even your own knowing, Akin to when light strikes the crevace of a diamond is your face in it's glowing, Womanhood, Maturity, and intellect manifest in ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Writer's Block revised
I look at my paper; It's blank. I look at my pencil; It's sharp. I've been sitting here for hours, Haven't written a word; I stare out the window Mind ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Last Black Horse
Over hill and over dale, Through the tempest, wild gale, The last black horse raced alone Chased by the man, face so pale. The night clung heavy, and cold, Rain, ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Why didn't anyone warn me?
Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. I hope you enjoy the site as much as we all do. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chatroom and talk ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Some Where Out There
Look Out there Way over there Look Out there I search And Search All day and night All to find nothing But Someday I Will find it What I'm looking ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: the Apocalypse
And many came to glimpse the fall and the horror spread through one and all their eyes were covered so they'd not see the pain that visited them that day ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: My First Poem
This is just a little something I wrote for a girl I'm currently seeing. I thought it'd be a nice thing to do. I just want some opinions on it ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Out-Laws Are Wanted
Something a little quirky. From a male point of view too. Oh my. Completely different to my usual stuff. Keep comments coming. It's been a year and time has come, ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: four.
Four. Our number, our years of nothing but together. The title we dubbed upon ourselves. Minutes on here, add on there. Someone got left out, someone else was introduced; yet ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Friendship (revised)
F riendship is precious, once in a lifetime, R arer than rare, gained only by time I mmortal, lasts forever E ven through time it cannot sever N ever perfect, ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Just Friends
We're friends We talk, We laugh. You touch me lightly on the arm, I wonder what this ment. Your smile is enough to make my heart melt But... we're just ...
Apr 8, 2008
